As I walked into the room everbody was talking and it was almost like being out of school. Then I noticed that there were tennis balls on the bottom of the desks and the smell of clean air swept over me. When we got to our desks and srarted to work you noticed the loud fan outside the classroom. Then out of the blue I had the taste of my gum that I had before class. I suddenly started to feel like I had been sitting there for hours. It made me feel like I wanted the day to end.
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ReplyDeletegood description for the feeling sence but you need more senses than just feel.
ReplyDeleteI was good, because I liked how you discribed....
ReplyDeleteit was a bit descriptive but i didnt get the first part when u walked in the class.
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ReplyDeleteDon't use that name!!!
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