Chevy Chevelle SS
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Chevy 1500 2002
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Wednesday, February 10, 2010
Sadness
As I left my friends when I was going to move I had tears in my eyes and they were rolling down my face like a water fall. It was like a big part of my life gone forever and I would never get it back. My face was like a fire and my tears felt ice cold. I thought I would never stop crying. I felt like I had never cried like this before. It was if they were family and you were just informed your favourite family member died. Everyone said that it's easy to move but I didn't think so. After a while I stopped crying and thought about all the good things that could come istead of the bad.
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i thought it was good but mabey extend it a little more
ReplyDeleteit was good but you could of made it longer
ReplyDeleteit was good but it doesn't really tell about why you'd be crying, is there anyreason?
ReplyDeleteI like your post becuase I could imagine this happening really easily. I like the disription in the sentance "My face was like fire and my tears ice cold" cause it contrasts nicely. You could have made it a little longer but over all, nice job :)
ReplyDeleteyou could have made it longer and you could have ended it not so breifly
ReplyDeletei liked it but it would be stronger if there was more detail and if it was a bit longer but other than that i really liked it keep it up:)
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